Our successful launch of Fundani to UK was fantastic!
by Nelisiwe Salmitar Mkhawanei - The Forgotten Angle Theatre JOURNEY TO UK From September 13th to 17th, our talented and enthusiastic...
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World War 11 Presentation by Eva, Year 5.
The Invasion of the Animals by Eva, Year 5.
Over and Over Again by Eva, Year 5.
Congratulations!
Paragraph edited by Lucy, Year 4
The comfortable classroom felt warm, quiet and snug with everyone in there. Ring ring, the annoying bell rung at the end of the hall it is rosy red and everyone who I know hates it. No one could stand lunch because it was always cold and noisy and there was nothing to do! Our playground was like a prison dull grey and boring!
Wow!
Such a powerful piece of writing Lucy - you are a shining star! I cannot believe how you are already establishing mood and imagery you’re going to be a superb writer well done!
Michelle
Eva
An outstanding story!
Your ideas are very well structured. Reference to the setting and detail is excellent. Your key character is very believable and I enjoyed the unexpected danger you included. You are starting to include more descriptions and figurative devices - well done! Now use metaphors, the curse followed.. and the ghostly serpent..... Remember that you can also use more punctuation for effect.
Your poem on diversity, "Over and Over" is very clear and makes significant points. Very well structured and thought through! You are a superstar writer! Please save your work under a file for writing competitions coming up. More information and details to follow!
Michelle
Tiger by Eva Clemenson , Year 6.
Congratulations!
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